Comments on: Episode 12 – Shorter, and Missing People

By: BrainWyrms » Blog Archive » Podsuming in an age of fork

BrainWyrms » Blog Archive » Podsuming in an age of fork — Tue, 28 Jul 2009 01:47:25 +0000

[...] Touching the Monolith Episode 12 – Shorter, and Missing People [...]

By: Nomad Scry

Nomad Scry — Mon, 27 Jul 2009 07:33:17 +0000

I have to say I was left wanting more.

And then the kazoos kicked in.

AAAAAAH.

But I’ll put up with them to find out what happens to Mr. Vanamonde, erm, I mean… *evil grin*

By: Lejon de la Juan Fondue

Lejon de la Juan Fondue — Wed, 22 Jul 2009 06:22:33 +0000

Future parts to No One SELF will be written, recorded, and dropped into the feed… Sure, writing them has to happen first… Baby steps…

By: imag1narynumber

imag1narynumber — Mon, 20 Jul 2009 23:57:55 +0000

I’d say it’s got a promising beginning, especially for your first such endeavor.

First off, the recording quality (from what I could hear) is very good. Far better than the podcast (echo, heavy breathing into the mic).

Secondly, I have to say I think your narration of the story is comfortably above-average. There’s a podcast that I listen to — and the host is very amiable, his content is pretty consistently good — his reading of submitted stories is deplorable. I’ve actually had to skip stories. It’s that bad.

My only concern is raised by the end of this episode. In regards to the technology. I just don’t want it to degrade to deus ex machina. But that’s a pitfall that I think you won’t fall in.

All that said, well done, and I’m looking forward to your future creations.

By: Gottoon

Gottoon — Mon, 20 Jul 2009 22:00:47 +0000

Great story Lejon, I look forward to future installments.